Saturday, April 21, 2012

NaPoWriMo, Day 21

Today's prompt from Poetic Asides was to write an "under the microscope" poem. Here's my attempt, of sorts.

What is left behind

You remove the adjectives first,
tell me how useless it is to have
them in a poem, extract the gerunds
and whittle them down to two, maybe
three. Next, you become the cliche
police and tell me my metaphors are
droll and overused. You slice my
stanzas with your sharp, red lines
and what is left is a hollowed out
fruit, a petri dish with a crumb.

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